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issue 131: June 2009 'FootSteps' by Robert 'Admiral' Coeyman

When you reach the last word in the last sentence of your text, let the story cool down for awhile. Come back to the story after you have written something else or read a good book. You do not actually have to read a book or write another story first. My point is that you have to come back and read your work after you have forgotten what you intended to write. That is the only way that you will ever be able to read what you actually wrote on the page.

Writing is a process of encoding the story that you are trying to tell into words. As long as the story is in the forefront of your mind, you are apt to read what you meant to write. That does not help the rest of us who have never heard the story in your head. We are seeing the story for the first time after you have polished the typing on the page. Putting the story aside and reading it later allows you to see what we are going to actually read.

Having the chance to clear up the story, so that the writing does not get in the way of the storytelling, is worth the extra time. Does your story still make sense when you read it a week later? Is the story everything that you remember writing? It is said that you never get a second chance at a first impression. You will find that this is also true in writing.

I am of the impression that you are writing with the intent of having your story made widely available to the reading public. Eventually, you will need the services of a good editor. It is never too soon to get into the good practice of editing your own works for the big problems so that the editor can spend time helping you with the small problems. You will be standing in line with a collection of other writers when your story goes off to see the editor. Your story will never get a second chance at a first impression.

There is very little writing that has to go to press so quickly that it cannot get some sleep on your hard disk drive and get a workout with your editing skills before it has to go public. If you are writing something that important, then you really need to have several sets of eyes look through the text on its way to the offset press. You will have a reputation with editors and your audience to protect as you grow in your writing. Do not be afraid to admit that anything can be improved. Your creations will be better for the effort that you invest in them.

--Robert 'Admiral' Coeyman



Orange

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JA Howe

 

In the Author's Words, I have a fantastical tale from the perspective of a bug.


 







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One call effects two lives in ways that cannot be undone.


 



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A teacher's final lesson in life.


 





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Love can cross barriers that the body cannot.


 



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It is no longer easy to be the hero.


 



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A snitch in time saves thine.


 



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Where is it that caped superheroes really come from? Can they be real enough to fight crime?




A Force to be Reckoned With

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How do you fight against a force which will not fight?




In My Leisure

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How much freedom would you give up to be free?





Ariadne

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What secret lies in the reclusive angel's stone fortress?




In the past year, I was invited to work on two Linux programming books for Sams Publishing. My task was to check the technical details of some of the chapters in these books and correct mistakes I found. The first of these is a general programming book which covers all the basic things that a beginning Linux C programmer needs to know. You can purchase this book here:

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What single event would it take to drive you insane?



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A year's friendship defines two lives.



Stop!

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Joel "Cop" Furches.

 

A bit of free verse commenting on Man's vision or lack thereof.



Eve of Salvation.

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Joel "Cop" Furches.

 

A familiar historical event with a different ending.




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Joel "Cop" Furches.

 

A play, both Biblical in proportion and in age.









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