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issue 159: January 2012 'defeat' by Justin

A friend of mine is trying to bring back the western. He has written the full first book in his trillogy and invited me to read over the manuscript. If you have been reading these pages for long enough, then you have also read the first draft of his manuscript. When he got toward the end of his book there was a discussion of how his villain had used discontent in his rise to power. My suggestion was to be less specific.

When "20000 Leagues Under the Sea" was written, France had a treaty with the nation that Verne was condemning with his novel. His agent was cautioning Mr. Verne against threatening the international relations of France with his manuscript. Mr. Verne converted the enemy fleet into ships that did not fly a flag. This actually improved the novel. There is always evil in the world.

When you get too specific in minor details of your writing, you tie yourself down. Will your story cease to be of interest to anybody because you were too strongly tied to a historical fallacy? Letting your audience fill in a few details allows the readers to read in things that appeal to them. Many of the things that I heave read lost points over points that the writer stuck in for the wrong reason. Would you be interested in a novel built around the coming ice age that was widely predicted in the seventies?

The biggest problem that I had with some of the things that I have been required to read is that I was forced to swallow things that I knew were wrong. None of those things actually had anything to do with what I was reading. The story would have been much more workable if it had not insulted my intelligence. But I am not writing this just to complain. My point is that leaving out specifics can make a story work better.

You can be specific when you are walking about specific people of groups. That adds realism to the thinking of those characters. When you do the same thing with the whole world, you spread the unbelieveable idea that everybody thinks the same thing in the same way. That does not work. Let people fill in the details and they will credit you with their work.

--Robert 'Admiral' Coeyman



Copper Wire of the Gods.

BY

J. A. Howe

 

How much power is too much?


 







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The Angels that you Forget.

BY

Admiral Coeyman

 

Do you know how much of a difference you make in the world just by being there?


 



Orange

BY

JA Howe

 

In the Author's Words, I have a fantastical tale from the perspective of a bug.


 

The Land of Sarnath

BY

Charles D. O'Connor III

 

Do you know your place in the world? Is your world the world that you are in?


 



Mrs.Smith's Lesson

BY

Joel 'Cop' Furches

 

A teacher's final lesson in life.


 



To Breathe

BY

JA Howe

 

Love can cross barriers that the body cannot.


 



Frank Met Peggy.

BY

Hg

 

A story from the elusive editor.


 



The Call

BY

Kathleen Wallace

 

A snitch in time saves thine.


 



Justice of the Mind's Eye

BY

Joel 'Cop' Furches

Where is it that caped superheroes really come from? Can they be real enough to fight crime?




A Force to be Reckoned With

BY:

Joel 'Cop' Furches

How do you fight against a force which will not fight?




In My Leisure

BY

Joel 'Cop' Furches

How much freedom would you give up to be free?





Ariadne

BY

Cailean Darkwater

What secret lies in the reclusive angel's stone fortress?




Some years ago, I was invited to work on two Linux programming books for Sams Publishing. My task was to check the technical details of some of the chapters in these books and correct mistakes I found. The first of these is a general programming book which covers all the basic things that a beginning Linux C programmer needs to know. You can purchase this book here:

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The Universe from my Backyard.

BY:

Joel "Cop" Furches.

 

What single event would it take to drive you insane?



Mariah's Year

BY

Admiral Coeyman

 

A year's friendship defines two lives.



Stop!

BY:

Joel "Cop" Furches.

 

A bit of free verse commenting on Man's vision or lack thereof.



Eve of Salvation.

BY:

Joel "Cop" Furches.

 

A familiar historical event with a different ending.




Estrangua

BY:

Joel "Cop" Furches.

 

A play, both Biblical in proportion and in age.









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